After / Crit

In the crit today I received some useful pointers regarding the direction of my design work. I received some good advice on how I could improve the cover of my menu and I decided to act on this promptly.

Firstly / on the branding I asked which of the two variations were the best, I was told the now with the hook at the base did the job best. The hook on the T could be accused of looking like an anchor, and looked like a J perhaps.

I agree entirely.

Also / the additional information was better at the base, as apposed to the below

 This is my new version.

better I think...

As well as this!!!

The line at the base should be equal to the text.

Before...

After...

This is my better version.